Philip Athans

Philip Athans – Editor

Former managing editor at Wizards of the Coast, working extensively in fantasy, SF, horror, thriller, literary, and narrative non-fiction.

Overview

“The world of publishing is growing more complicated, but also more interesting for those willing to think outside the box. I know I am, and having Phil Athans out there as a resource takes the scare out of it.”

—R.A. Salvatore, author of The Legend of Drizzt


It's not just my job to find what's wrong with a book, but to preserve and encourage what's right about it.


No two manuscripts, and no two authors, are exactly the same. No two edits will be either. So what do I look for when I start an edit?


Everything.


And I mean literally everything from big-picture issues like story structure and worldbuilding to grammar and usage, always with your unique goals and your unique voice in mind.


I’ve worked with a wide range of publisher, author, and other clients including Pixar Animation Studios, Adams Media, Simon & Schuster, Penguin Random House, Amazon/57 North, Pyr, Appalachian Mountain Club Books, Wizards of the Coast, Permuted Press, and almost too many indie authors--at all experience levels across a range of genres and categories--to count.


I’ve worked extensively in fiction (primarily fantasy, science fiction, and horror, but other genres as well), non-fiction (from books on the software industry to camping and kayaking guides), gaming (digital and tabletop), and more.


I've been working in publishing since 1986.


IF IT’S GOT WORDS, I CAN HELP MAKE IT BETTER.


I'm proud to work with LGBTQI+, POC, indigenous, and all other human authors. I will not work with "AI"/LLM/ChatBot-generated text.

Services
Fiction
Epic Fantasy Gaming & LitRPG Horror Space Opera
Languages
English (UK) English (US)

Work experience

Wizards of the Coast

Sep, 1995 — Jun, 2010 (over 14 years)
I had primary responsibility for the strategic and tactical goals of a multi-million dollar adult and children’s trade publishing enterprise. I created or was instrumental in helping create several brand identities, including the Discoveries and Mirrorstone imprints, led a cross-functional team with representatives from all areas of the company, crafted marketing and sales communications for both consumer-facing and business-to-business strategies, worked with licensees in everything from audiobook creation to electronic gaming, managed P&Ls, scheduling, and other aspects of getting products into the marketplace, and led a staff of professionals through complex and unforgiving workflow demands.

Self-employed

Sep, 2010 — Present
Founder and sole proprietor of a creative services consulting agency, specializing in all aspects of transmedia expression and brand development, such as creative IP development, branding, licensing and distribution, and recruiting. My specific skills in this agency include writing and editing; traditional, e-book, and audiobook publishing; marketing communications (consumer-facing and B2B); copywriting; advertising; and marketing.

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Echoes of Ghostwood (The Warminster Series)

Hilliard, J.V.

Dragon Moon Press

Flower World

Biscuit, Baxter

Independently published

Realms Of War (Forgotten Realms Anthology, 12)

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Wizards of the Coast

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Jaga's Bones

McHardy, Simon

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Last Dragon

McDermott, J.M.

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Entangled Lives

Omer, Imran

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The Last Arcenaux

Puglia, George

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Philip has 8 reviews

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Milos D.

Milos D.

Apr, 2025

As a first-time writer, I really appreciated Philip's patience and understanding. He was very professional and truly understood the challenges I was facing. The project went as smoothly as it could. He also did several types of editing for me, going above and beyond. I'm grateful to have come acr...
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Adam C.

Adam C.

Mar, 2025

I’ve been extremely pleased with the editorial services Philip provided. He’s really gone above and beyond what I expected, and it’s helped me bring my manuscript to the next level. I’ve greatly appreciated his teaching-focused approach as this has helped enhance my own skillset going forward. Ad...
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Jardane H.

Jardane H.

Mar, 2025

Philip is just the best, and saying that should be enough, but I don’t quite think that it is. He gave me just the right amount of critique, saw what I was trying to do, and pushed me down the right path. This editor gave me harsh truths and it improved my writing tenfold. Definitely recommend if...
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Solstice S.

Solstice S.

Jan, 2025

Phillip was great to work with, easy to communicate with and provided great insight that went beyond just 'proof reading'. I'm looking forward to continuing my collaboration with Phillip as we finalize my manuscript!
Philip A.
So happy to have been allowed to be a part of this fantastic work--and to keep going with it!
Galapagos P.

Galapagos P.

Jan, 2025

Philip was great! Super detailed feedback. Could see clearly what I was trying to accomplish, and very specific the directions I could take to get closer to my goal. Super encouraging but not shy about telling me where my piece was weak or needed rework. Would definitely work with again. Thanks P...
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Philip A.
Thank you--the story is terrific, such a great idea, and I loved the work you put in before and after it came my way.

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